Amazing
It was quite good. Quite random, but with good animation so it was good. But, it wasn't funny enough to be a joke, and it wasn't serious enough (both in drawing style and content) to be taken seriously. So, I was left in a sort of middle ground. So I gave it a 4. Good job though.
It's not supposed to be a joke but thanks.
Work harder
As my ears were being raped by the horrible music which didn't go with the flash at all, I had to be subjected to a bad skating flash. I've been there; we all have. Try harder. The graphics were okay, but became horrible because it was sticks. The animation was poor and there is no sense of physics. It was also short. very short.
Put some effort into a cool, non stick flash that has something more than anti-climactic bails.
yes i agree
flash kinda ruins music and i didnt even try hard to edit the song
its actually a good song but i/flash ruined it
It was good, but had problems
I liked it, it was entertaining, and Relient K is a good band. But to be honest, the graphics were terrible. here, try this: once the image is copied into flash, click on it and go to modify, trace bitmap. Then it should still look like it's 16 or 32 bit or whatever, but you can delete those anoying green outlines, clean it up, and such. Just an idea. Also, work on drawing backgrounds or just find background pictures and use them.
But I gotta say, neglecting the graphics for a second, it was really good. Seems like you put in a lot of effort, and it was a good flash overall.
Thank you! So far, this is been the best review ever. Your critique really helps! Thanks! =D
Great!
Very good Dini, great drawings and animation, and good choice of music! Damn, now I wanna go vote til I get one of these.
- Empyreal Clock
Do your best, Empy'. ^_~
Great Job!
That was really good.I remember seeing your first one a while ago, which was also very good, but I must say, this was a lot better. The art style and the animation were great! The backgrounds also looked amazing. I can't believe that thats all original music too, it sounded great. I also really liked the background story too, with the ideas of how to reach Origin and such. I can't wait for another one, if you decide to make one.
Thanks..
And good job getting Arnold for govenour!
You need some work
Firstly, I really must congradulate you and thank you for contributing the the Clock flash community, instead of just the BBS. That having been said, you still have a lot of work to do to get good at flash. Basically, you drew nothing but your own character for this, and used old, unoriginal jokes. Not to say those jokes are bad, but they are used way too often at unfunny places, or just put in to try to get a quick laugh.
Simply: Start drawing. You need to draw, you need to animate, you need to do a lot more if you want to make a flash ANIMATION.
Also, and more importantly, make up plotlines; don't just regurgitate other peoples jokes.
But please, keep working at it, this was pretty good, and I'm sure you'll come out with something great next.
thank you and i iwll think of some original jokes and i will animate
Nice idea...
I must say, the plot isn't lacking, and the humor was good. My main problem was that it simply dragged on and on with endless computer voice monologues and lacked any real animation. In fact, most of your drawings were, in fact, not yours at all, but shared drawings from the whole clock crew.
Keep this content, its great, but work on your animation. All you did was little tweens, etc. And work on your sound timing, because it got off several times.
But keep up the good work in the way of plot! I can't wait to see more.
-Empyreal Clock
Say thanks a lot! Yes the graphics were used (not stolen) by the Clock Crew Corner. And i did have a fair amount of animation, but I wouldnt say very many. Sound timing was kinda off, that happens cuz after i submit it, when its on the Portal it is usually slower in frames. The main part of the movie was the plot, and I'm hoping to achieve more in the idea than the other parts of the flash. Thanks Empyreal Clock...
Fifen!
haha yes, great movie!! That was amazing drawing and animation, very funny, and just damn good all around! You need to make more flash!
AND I'M IN THIS!!! HUZZAH!
{{{Knight}}} <3
-Empyreal Clock
Lol, so excited for a guy who just gets thrown into a bag, \:P
Genius Movie!
I must say, this is a great movie. Perfect title, and very well animated and, of course, perfect characters! Great job!
- Empyreal Clock
To kind, <333.
The most inteligent thing I've seen
You, my good sir, are a Genius. Its nice to see flash with real thought in them you don't get it very often, but this is one of the few exceptions. I must say, you're views are quite interesting, and I agree with most of them. You must understand, I am quite tired from working on my Clockday flash late last night, so it was hard to follow everything you said. However, I must disagree with your views on fate, as you seem to believe in free will. However logical it seems, at least to me, from the point of view of a persons mind, the scientific logic doesn't work. Because, if time is the fourth dimention, then in the fourth dimention, all of time is current, meaning everything has already happened, making fate impossible. at least, that's my opinion. As for the meaning of life? Yes, I agree, to strive for hope. I also think happiness, frankly, is even more important, and I know you mentioned it, but I dont remember what you said about it. To finish off, a good quote from a bad movie:
"You shouldn't take life to seriously; you'll never get out of it alive." ~ Van Wilder
-Empyreal Clock
Like I said, I refuse to believe in an abstract universe without spontaneous change. Perhaps it is so, but, as the universe as a grand mechanic, it might still be open for flaws - the small ripples of change and different fates. Again, I must stress out that is how -I- myself see this. I will not argue on different observations upon being, it will only prove fruitless. Still, your reason is as sound as mine was, so hats off ^_^
Enjoy Clock Day, my friend. Don't drink and drive!
I'm a lazy bastard. ~~I am otherwise known as Empyreal Clock of the Clock Crew~~
Age 35, Male
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California
Joined on 6/19/02
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